June 24

however she couldn’t believe what she had done. (2.0)

It was rightfully hers. But Annabelle’s evil step aunt had forbidden her to touch it and put it on display in her jewellery shop. It was a shining, diamond ring. It was her birthday tomorrow; her plan was simple:

  • Turn eighteen
  • Move out
  • Steal the ring
  • Sell it
  • By a house
  • Live a happy life

So when she turned eighteen, she moved out and stole the ring but all this anger swelled up inside her so she stole everything and burnt the shop. She sold the stuff  and got a house however, she still couldn’t beive what she had done.

June 24

Week#36 (18)

An   Italian, town was named after the medusae Pythonis witch is Latin for the Medusa python and I am here to tell you the story: it was war and citizens had discovered a weapon that could end Italy. It was a gun that had an extremely powerful bomb. General Haphusto was ready to fire when the Medusa snake crawled up him. The General froze. The snake knotted it’s huge but elegant body at the tip of the gun. The General came back and fired! But Italy was still standing because he destroyed the snake. It’s how we got our name.

June 24

Week#35 (18)

At school, at any school, thiers ussualy that fithy rich kid who gets anything she wants and can patically get away with murder. At anna’s school, her name is Violate Beartrix. Her mum is the princepal an dher dad is alawyet. She get’s anything she wants and wins in everything weather she cheats or convinces mommy to pull a few strings. She buys her way out of everything and is so mean! Oneday she buoght something that anna thought she would never lose: her friends.

It is something she would do, however, she couldn’t believe what she had just done.

June 4

Week #34 (18)

 Bridge sprinkled daffodill huge pink

It was a summer morning and Mrs G.Annaer’s life was perfect. She had a family, a great job, what could go wrong?

Her beautiful children, Anna and Elizabeth were playing with daffodils and having a picnic by the lake.

“Okay girls its time to eat the cupcakes! The icings pink! Girls? girls!” Said Mrs G. anners.

Suddenly there was a huge splash coming from the lake.


She ran to the bridge at lightning speed but it was too late, the girls had already slipped under the sparkling water of Flowlash Lake as it sprinkled in the sunlight.Image result for a picnic by a lake with a bridge


June 4

Week#33 (18)

 We’re hunting trough a noisy jungle

Hi I’m Tara. I’m on the run with my siblings because we stole a robotic leg for my brother who lost his leg in war my parents died in. Now we’re in Tasmania living on the run. I was the oldest, liv was second, Anna wast third and Silky and Hamish were twins.

We’re hunting in a noisy jungle trying to find anything edible. Then we heard the dripping, flowing water of a waterfall and nearby lake. The twins and I caught fish and Anna got a bottle of water. Suddenly we heard the unmistakably familiar sound of a police car.



Image result for JUNGLE with BLUE RIVER

June 1

Week#33 (18)

It was 1982 in England. My name’s Blume and English explores had found an animal apparently called a kangaroo. My dad had got fired as an explorer and I sore. “Please I’m sorry, it won’t happen again,” He pleaded.

“I know it won’t. You didn’t find anything in Australia but spiky balls! You’re fired!” said his boss.

“No! He did found something. These weird balls can change maybe,” I tipped a glass of wine on the balls and … they started to multiply and fill up the room. I couldn’t see the boss any more or my dad.


June 1

Week #32 (18)

…but I didn’t understand the instructions…


“No!!!!!” I screamed as Mr Glashlight steals money and emerald through my camera. First I didn’t understand but it made sense now. I’m an agent called Jason. I was supposed to crack the code of Mr Glashlight and his act. I looked in the mirror. My hair was messy my face was pale and I had dark circles under my eyes. Was this the face of failier? I was sent into my boss Mrs Vs office. “YOU!!!” she bellowed.

I didn’t understand the instrucions” I mumbelled.

“You’re suspended,”



I looked in the mirror. This is the face of failier

May 31

Kid should have less homework

Dear Principle, Matthew Bott,

I strongly agree that kids should have not more, but less home work because we have after school activities, we already have enough homework and we can get stressed and lose sleep.

My first reason is that most kids have after school activities that usually go for one or two hours so you wouldn’t have much time to do your homework. If we have more homework, we might not have enough time to do the homework. There are 24 kids in my class and more than two thirds of the class have four or more activities a week. Only around 34% have 3 or less activities a week; 17 kids in our class have four or more activities a week.

My second reason is that we already have enough homework! We have to do vocab homework MHwhich can take 5 to 10  minutes a week, then we have our summary and reflection which takes around ten minutes, then we have to do at least 20m of reading for five days, plus after school catch up homework and blogs which takes 5 to 10 minutes and some people play an instrument at school and have to practise which can take as long as you want so that’s around three hours a week of home work and some people go to after school care so it’s hard to fit in three hours of homework in especially if you have after school activities plus we have 5 hours a day of learning at school which is 30 hours a week of learning plus homework we learn 33 hours; 7 more hours than a day. We learn at home and school for more than a day I think that’s enough.

My final reason is that kids wouldn’t have enough time to do homework. We have thirty three hours of homework a week but some kids can’t fit that all in. Some kids have after school activities that can go on for one to two hours and some kids have after school care as well. Say that there’s a kid who to after school care until five thirty, then he has to do two hours of soccer training than he has to go home, have a shower and eat dinner so by now it’s 8 `o clock than he has to read of at least 20 minutes  next he’s got to do his vocab and his summary so now it’s around  8:30 but he still has to catch up on some homework on his blog, say he has to right a story so now it’s about 9:00 and if we have more homework we would have to stay up late and we  could get stressed which isn’t good for kids and if we have to much homework than wouldn’t get much sleep and sleep is extremely important because it helps you grow and if we don’t sleep we won’t grow and we’d be extremely tired for the next day of school so we would not be able to concentrate on learning and if our parents don’t allow us to stay up late than we wouldn’t be able to do our homework and we would have to do it at school wasting our play time.



I strongly believe that kids should have less homework because we have after school activities, we could get stressed and lose sleep and we already have a reasonable amount of homework. In conclusion these are my reasons we should have less home work.



May 23

Everyone Should Learn How To Swim

I strongly agree that it’s extremely important for everyone to learn how to swim because of safety and health reasons, as well as swimming being great fun.

On the last school swimming carnival I was in the Girls Open. When I was six I did swimming lessons until I was seven but I never learnt how to properly swim so I lost the girls open and now I really want to learn how to swim. I don’t want to let my team down again. I think everyone should learn how to swim, don’t you?


My first reason is because of safety. More than 3,536 people drown each year. Do we really want that number to increase? If everyone learnt how to swim properly than I’m sure that the number will decrease. People learning how to correctly swim is most crucial because of the safety. What would happen if you didn’t know how to swim and a huge wave appeared while you were swimming at the beach? Or if you got stuck in a rip? Or if you fell out of a boat? If you didn’t know how to swim, how would you be able to get back to the shore?


My second reason is that swimming is one of the most healthy and active sports with plenty of different strokes. Swimming can make you fit, healthy and strong. It’s a fun and competitive sport I believe everyone can enjoy. It is good for asthma and can improve your general fitness. By everyone learning how to swim, more kids can have a better chance at the swimming carnival so people can go to districts and represent our amazing school.


My last reason is that swimming is incredibly fun! Swimming is great fun if your playing underwater tag or having a friendly race with your siblings. Have you ever been at a friends pool party and watch or friends have all the fun while you sit on the side lines because you can’t swim? swimming is so much fun. you could be playing games underwater or doing some backstroke is all so enjoyable. Ithink that swimming is extremely fun.


In conclusion I strongly believe that everyone should learn how to swim because it’s healthy, people need to learn how to be safe around water and  swimming is amazing fun! I think these are strong reasons of why I think everyone should learn how to swim. Do you?


May 21

Books VS T.V.

I strongly believe that incredible books are better than mind numming T.V because their healthier than T.V, they improve skills and they give you a good imagination. Have you ever been extremely bored so you go watch T.V but you’ve already watched every movie or show ever made so you become more bored? I have.

My first reason about books being better than T.V is that books are amazing and T.V is boring and terrible for your health. If you sit on the couch all day watching mind numming T.V your eyes will get sore and eyes are only fully formed when your thirteen so don’t start breaking them now. By the way, when you watch T.V you probably on a bad possession on the couch which is going to really hurt your back and neck when you wake up the next day.

My next reason is how books make you intelligent. Reading is incredible, it expands your vocabulary and depending on what you’re reading you can learn cool and interesting stuff that can help you at school and reading improves visualisation skills and C.A.F.E strategies which are good for school.
My third reason is that reading gives you an incredible imagination no matter what you’re reading. A person who can imagine can write which will help at school, and become authors, song writers, dancers, chefs, designers or pretty much anything. Imagination will help. You just need to read.
The premiers reading challenge is also on time to time and reading a lot of books will definitely, 100% help with that.

My last reason is that TV is bad for your social wellbeing. If you’re on the couch all day without going outside you won’t get a lot of fresh air and it’s proven that a person should spend at least my last reason is that TV is bad for your social wellbeing. If you’re on the couch all day without going outside you won’t get a lot of fresh air and it’s proven that a person should spend at least one hour a day outside. People should have fun, go out live a little and not be stuck on their screens.

This is why I think books are better than T.V, because their better for your health, They improve school work, vocab skills, C.A.F.E skills, visualisation skills plus, reading can give you a wild immagination which can help you with almost anything, so, in conclusion I strongly belive that intelligent incredible amazing books are way better than old boreing mind mumming un healthy T.V.

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